I faced some difficulty working out the style for Dragon Garage, and there were many false starts. It became so frustrating I did another entire graphic novel in the meantime.
With this version I tried for a light, squiggly line combined with a tone. Something different from what I've done before.
Unfortunately, it didn't have the energy I was looking for.
Back to the drawing board, as they say...
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| I like the first page, Zach looks worried, but the angle could be more dramatic |
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| The framing is a little lacklustre here, a little straightforward. And the angles aren't extreme enough. |
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| I like the dust in the top panel, it sets up the surprise for the villains in the third panel nicely. |
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| Should have shown Zach getting out of the vehicle here, for context. Also, I'm not very consistent with his appearance. Ugh. |
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